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Description This package includes in-text comments and a reader's report for your novel of up to 30k words This package includes in-text comments and a reader's report for your novel of up to 60k words This package includes in-text comments and a reader's report for your novel of up to 90k words
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About This Proposal

Are you passionate about perfecting your story? Do you need a fresh pair of eyes to look over your manuscript? Then look no further - I'm your girl!


From a reader's perspective, I will read your novel and provide a comprehensive, constructive critique. My feedback will include both in-text comments and a reader’s report focused on making your writing shine.


Some of the things I consider while reading include:

  • Does the first chapter grab and hold my attention?
  • Do the characters go through meaningful development?
  • Is the plot clear and believable?
  • Are there moments where the pacing feels off?
  • Is the worldbuilding fleshed out?
  • Is the dialogue natural and engaging?
  • Is the ending satisfying?
  • Are there any errors or inconsistencies?
  • What are my favorite parts?


Now, why trust me with your literary baby? Aside from being a voracious reader and dedicated writer, I hold a BA in English Literature and a certificate in Public & Professional Writing. I spent the majority of my educational career writing papers, presenting at writing panels, and serving as the social media manager for the University of Pittsburgh's poetry department.


Thank you, I look forward to working with you!

10 Reviews 5.0

  • trafficsocial

    comments were ok, but most not particularly helpful...mostly just criticism without suggestions for improvement
    Jan 04 2022

  • njolela

    Sarah was very thorough. She caught mistakes and made great suggestions. Good insight well presented.
    Jan 04 2022

  • dash64ndos

    Sarah did a great job of providing feedback on how I can improve my work.
    Jan 04 2022

  • dash64ndos

    Sarah did a great job of providing feedback on how I can improve my work.
    Jan 04 2022

  • kingstontraffic

    Another fantastic experience working with Sarah!
    Jan 04 2022

  • croods

    Greatly helpful, as always. Definitely recommend.
    Jan 04 2022

  • aimandesignn

    This was a very careful beta read with comments throughout the manuscript about characters, pacing, plot, and so on.
    Jan 04 2022

  • medinaid

    My order came back on the due date and the work was as described. Thanks!
    Jan 04 2022

  • ngoclam

    Very professional and provided good constructive feedback that gave me so many ideas for my manuscript.
    Jan 04 2022

  • jhalakpro94

    seller did what she was paid for in a prompt, professional, and courteous manner. Her comments were helpful. I would use her again.
    Jan 04 2022

  • trafficsocial

    comments were ok, but most not particularly helpful...mostly just criticism without suggestions for improvement
    Jan 04 2022

  • njolela

    Sarah was very thorough. She caught mistakes and made great suggestions. Good insight well presented.
    Jan 04 2022

  • dash64ndos

    Sarah did a great job of providing feedback on how I can improve my work.
    Jan 04 2022

  • dash64ndos

    Sarah did a great job of providing feedback on how I can improve my work.
    Jan 04 2022

  • kingstontraffic

    Another fantastic experience working with Sarah!
    Jan 04 2022

  • croods

    Greatly helpful, as always. Definitely recommend.
    Jan 04 2022

  • aimandesignn

    This was a very careful beta read with comments throughout the manuscript about characters, pacing, plot, and so on.
    Jan 04 2022

  • medinaid

    My order came back on the due date and the work was as described. Thanks!
    Jan 04 2022

  • ngoclam

    Very professional and provided good constructive feedback that gave me so many ideas for my manuscript.
    Jan 04 2022

  • jhalakpro94

    seller did what she was paid for in a prompt, professional, and courteous manner. Her comments were helpful. I would use her again.
    Jan 04 2022

  • There is currently no negative review for this proposal/service.

Basic $55.00 55

This package includes in-text comments and a reader's report for your novel of up to 30k words

2 Days Delivery     1 Revisions
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Standard $90.00 90

This package includes in-text comments and a reader's report for your novel of up to 60k words

3 Days Delivery     2 Revisions
 Add to Cart Order Now ($90.00)

Advance $140.00 140

This package includes in-text comments and a reader's report for your novel of up to 90k words

5 Days Delivery     Unlimited Revisions
 Add to Cart Order Now ($140.00)

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