Hey, future published authors,

I'm Alyssa, and I am a ferocious reader of all things YA and Adult. Contemporary, romance and romcoms are my jam! I've been inhaling books for as long as I've been reading and will help ensure your readers walk away from your book laughing, crying, and anything in between. As long as they walk away feeling something! That's the writer's job, after all.

If you want praise, ask a family member to read your manuscript. If you want honest critique with ways to improve those trouble spots: ask me.

As the daughter of an agented author, I've spent hundreds of hours learning craft and critiquing manuscripts from the first draft to submission-ready. No matter where you are on your journey, I can help.

Genres: YA and Adult contemporary, fantasy, romance, sci-fi

Feedback covers:

Plot/Plotholes/Plot inconsistencies

Subplot (if you have a romantic subplot)

Characters (how to make them three-dimensional, and are they relatable?)

Pacing (Soggy middle? rushed scenes?)

Dialogue (Natural/stilted/confusing tags)

Worldbuilding

Confusing moments

Real-time reader reaction

Upon delivery you'll receive:

• a copy of your manuscript with in-line comments
• reader report