Hello!

My name is Sinno and I'm here to make your work be the best version of itself! I want to be that beta reader who sees your work improve over time, cheering you on as you succeed!

This is a line by line exhaustive analysis. Here is what I provide:

Color-coded comments:

• Green highlighted comments indicate lines that really moved me. (I will usually explain why this line specifically works.)
• Yellow highlighted comments indicate lines that may have been awkward or confusing for me.
• Red highlighted comments (or strikethroughs) indicate lines or phrases that you might consider editing out in later revisions.

Reader report:

• Character + Plot arc analysis
• Worldbuilding questions/analysis/excitement
• Writing style analysis (what I believe your biggest strengths are)
• Things I am excited to learn/read about in future versions of your work

How will this improve your writing? You will understand:

1. Your strengths and weaknesses as a writer.
2. How effective your characters, pacing, set up and payoff, and overall structure are to the narrative.

Let's do this :)

*FOR EDITING/COPYEDITING, PLEASE CONTACT ME DIRECTLY! I will do a custom order for you!*